Narrative Ideas

Narrative Ideas:



· The man sitting in his chairs as the camera slowly pulls back



· Flashbacks to the war,







Before he goes to war, smartly dress. Says goodbye loving to his Gf



After the war, scruff. Just saying bye to Gf



When he snaps, smartly dressed again. Saying nothing to her







Takes pills



After he stops taking the films







Girlfriend talks over (Asynchronous dialogue)







Photo of the family = happy together, pulls away to show the real family tied up together







Getting equipment ready







His talking about his mate Charlie (Think about Percy Warner)







Setting six form centres, making it a call centre as it is stressful







Him watching the news about a missing person, flashback to him kidnapping them.












In order:



Before he goes to war, smartly dress. Says goodbye loving to his Gf



Girlfriend talks over (Asynchronous dialogue)



After the war, scruff. Just saying bye to Gf



Takes pills



Girlfriend talks over (Asynchronous dialogue)



When he snaps, smartly dressed again. Saying nothing to her



After he stops taking the pills















This is a draft of our ideas that we are piecing together to make our film. Some ideas we have is one scene is that some people are playing a war game and a bomb sound goes off and this triggers a flashback which is a tragic one, this is what triggers the individual to snap and start kidnapping people. It also talks about taking pills this is a common contrast of real life because most people have mental problems that need to be controlled at it shows through the trailer that missed day of taking them can trigger little things that turn into big things. This will draw the audience in because they are feeling sympathetic to the main character because all he needs to do is take his pills and he will be fine.